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mutationofthecadaver
ROTTING MUTILATION - i think i drummed a lot better!
Demonic Reign
If the new song is Soft White Flesh (or whatever the hell it's called), I find it extremely boring. I turned it off after about 20 seconds.
EYEHATEGOD
QUOTE (Demonic Reign+Aug 25 2008, 08:41 PM)
If the new song is Soft White Flesh (or whatever the hell it's called), I find it extremely boring. I turned it off after about 20 seconds.
you cant really judge a song after 20 sconds dude......in saying that this is definitely a bit poo hahaha.....the breakdown was fucking shit and the drums have a weird clicky sound to them......overall....my ears were raped sorry mate
Mutilated1
not nearly fast enough

and whats that beeping noise ?
wardepartment
That was not good at all dude sad.gif
Rotting Decrepit Corpse
good , but not as good as my band
Devourer_Of_Vaginal_Skin
Not bad at all dude. Your drums could sound better mind you...but...all in all a good effort.

Despite the sub-standard production I found your new song to be pretty cool. smile.gif
mutationofthecadaver
it might start slow, but it has some of the fastest parts i've ever played. there shouldn't be any clicking noises... and i really am into chuggy parts lately. i guess sorry that it didn't do it for most of ya'll, but i really like it, so oh well.
Souless
QUOTE (mutationofthecadaver+Aug 26 2008, 11:11 PM)
i guess sorry that it didn't do it for most of ya'll, but i really like it, so oh well.
it wasent all that bad man..dont be so glum. i give you more props then alot of other folk here cuz you actually post your shit be it to everyones liking or not. where alot of other supposed musical folk here havent posted a sound clip one of anything they do or did...so dont take it so bad man...

my only request would be you put in there more deeper DM vocals, you touched on them a bit in that song and others and i personally liked that sound better then the pig screeching vox.granted the pig screeching has its place but IMO in more limited quanity lol.gif .just my prefrence..

anyways keep up the good fight and enjoy doing what you do which obviously you do! fuck the haters and be true to yourself! and if you need any motivational material watch the I GOT BRACES video...lol

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Irate Nate
not bad at all for a rough demo,you've definitely got potential brotha so keep on keepin' on I say \m/ devil.gif
SHUT UP AND DIE
QUOTE (Souless+Aug 27 2008, 11:43 AM)
the pig screeching vox.granted the pig screeching has its place but IMO in more limited quanity  lol.gif .just my prefrence..

There weren't any "pig vocals" in that clip, dude. High pitched screams, yes, but no pig vocals. D'OH!

And personally, there were elements I liked in it. The drums....meh, that clicking's got to go, but give it some more practice and they'll rule. I give homie props as well for doing everything himself and posting it without fear. Oh, and I like those "pig screams". laugh.gif
Thrones of Blood
Some coolness here and there...


A for effort.....
DeadbyDawn
The drums are always a huge deal to me, especially in this type of music, so like a few others have already pointed out earlier on, I also feel some genuine improvements required on that front. I liked hearing you say that you're lately digging "chuggy" segments quite a lot. I like that stuff myself. If you fancy 'groove' then maybe you could incorporate some of that style into your overall sound, as well...Although I don't particularly hugely love a lot of the "groove-laden" sounds of very many dm acts out there, I gotta say that 'groovy' 'grinding' dm, done right, can sound devastatingly cool. Think Dying Fetus.. wink.gif smile.gif

I liked the vocals in your song, except perhaps the high-pitched screams (as good as they were) could be used a bit more sparingly and instead you could be striving harder for a better, lower, more guttural growling delivery used more often in the course of your songs.

All that said, I honestly LIKE what I heard and can only urge you to keep making strides in the studio and giving us a taste of all the stuff you are cooking up from time to time.. cool.gif smile.gif
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