i recorded a short instrumental, it's kinda hard to hear so put the volume up all the way it will be up at http://www.freewebs.com/tinfoilradio as the backround music on the home page

so any comments or criticism would be great

and yeah the acoustic guitar sounds like shit

hahhaa Nice bro- but lastnight, I had a dream about this lady being gutted...it was freaky but awesome

I gotta be honest, that fucking sucked. It goes nowhere.

yeah i agree, it was improvised so it doesn't really have a structure yet, good thing it's only a rough, rough, rough,rough , rough demo

You should name it "Dissection of Human Beings" instead. Dreams are gay.

good point , i'm still working on a title that sounds black metal ish

it was meh imo

WOW. Uhhhhhhh, practice makes perfect dude!