I dont have a name for it any ideas might help ... but it is about a deranged butcher that abducts people and butchers them and sells their meat. He first abducts homeless people and gets away with a few murders and than he starts writing letters to the police about the abductions and the way he kills them and of course he tortures them before he hans them on meat hooks and butchers them. He is cannibalistic obviously and it deals a little with his childhood and growing up and in depth looks into his mind. Eventually he starts abducting children and than it becomes more involved with suspense police... Im still workin on it but i have about 120 pages done.. once i figure out how i want to end ill go back and touch it up and add to it. This is a final assignment for my college english course but if it turns out good and i really think it is not to brag but i think im a gifted writer im gunan send it to out to publishers... lol i dunno if theres anyway i can post it on line. but i will definately try to get bits of it on for anybody interested.. i was thinking about naming the killer chris fisher. or george barnes lol... but i don't know if it is at all possible perhaps ill email corpse and see if thats appropriate.

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sounds like a cool idea, very gory lmao. lets hope you dont get sent to a shrink for this just kiddin.

120 pages!? how long u been writing it for? post it on here sometime dude! well... post some of it lol. someone might ripp it off.

name the killer Tino Tontiloni (sp?) lmfao. name the killer Tom Barnes. idk why but that sounds cool to me for some reason... aah w/e do what u want man, but it sounds cool!

yeah ive been workin on it for a semester it has to be atleast 150 pgs but its double spaced... but i think once i get it graded im gunna have my teacher revise it and finish it. Yeah it's gory but it's nothing that hasnt been done. Its just a novel and i guess i have a morbid writing style i liek horror suspence psychological so its what im aiming for

sounds sweet dude, E-mail it to me when your done! i wanna check it out

no doubt

i'm quite interested in it too.

i want to read it.

i'm not sure if you already named the main character, name him Ed Fisher or Chris Gein

i would but thats such a cheesy rip off lol u cant make a story and steal a real serial killers name it's just not right

i wouldn't post too many of your ideas...never know who may copy your works as their own

when i was 18, i was about 75% done with a novel about a fictional character based on me and my teenage struggles with drug addiction. had 500 pages written on my computer, then my aunt (who i was living with) had a falling out and i moved out and she wouldnt give me my computer back. she ended up reading the novel, deleting it, and then proceeded to tell me about how much talent i have for writing. she also deleted about 100 songs that i had written. fucking cunt. i'll never forgive her for that. ever since, i havent had the inspiration to write, and i used to write short stories all of the time along with this novel that i was writing.

Your aunt deleted a 500-page story that you wrote? That sucks, especially after the hard work you put into it.


Anyways...

Sounds like a nice novel, Vile Suffering!

you're telling me. i put my heart and soul into that fucking book.

i would slaughter. you should have disemboweled her

Sounds interesting, Vile Suffering. Would you send it to me when it's finished? I would love to read it, sounds like a great theme, there are too few gory books.

Vish man, that fucking sucks. I'd go berserk if anyone did that to me. When my computer chrashed this summer I lost quite a few songs I'd written, and that was enough for me, I got really pissed. To loose 100 songs and a fucking 500-page book would drive me crazy Those things never come back, and I hate to let something I've created get lost.

Sounds very American Psycho-esque. Have you read that book yet? If so you should.
That book is so fucking brutal. I'm the kind of guy that browses ogrish.com for fun and enjoys gorey horror movies more than any other kind of movie but holy shit some parts in that book made me sick to my stomach.

Definately post some of it, if you feel like it that is, this sounds pretty sweet.

Sounds good Vile Suffering.

I was working a novel not too long ago... except the person I was working with on it is too busy with his school work. Umm... but I'm gonna pick up where we left off when he has the time. I don't think I may get back to it. I'd rather write music and lyrics.

good luck with the writing man I never have been interested in writing for myself but hey it's great that you are