well, you really have to hear the music in order for the lyrics to make sense and all, but...here they are, this song's called 'spiritual lacerations'...tell me what you think


SPIRITUAL LACERATIONS

(VERSE)(X2)
Existance...Existance...Existance...Waste of humans
Read the lies...Read the lies...Read the lies...Cut me again
Hell awaits...Hell awaits...Hell awaits...Eternal pain
Spiritual...Spiritual...Spiritual...Lacerations

(CHORUS)
Doomed...Your own fate
Rotted bodies lie...Writhing as they die
Because of you
Doomed...Through your hate
The corpses lie in wake...As you enter hell's gates
Now you shall die

(VERSE 2)(X2)
Existance...Existance...Existance...Waste of humans
Live the lie...Live the lie...Live the lie...Degenerate
Thousands die...Thousands die...Thousands die...Devastation
Spiritual...Spiritual...Spiritual...Lacerations

(CHORUS)
Doomed...Your own fate
Rotted bodies lie...Writhing as they die
Because of you
Doomed...Through your hate
The corpses lie in wake...As you enter hell's gates
Now you shall die

(BRIDGE)
Mutilation
Conflagration
Incantation
Lacerations

Complete fiction
Exploitation
Correlation
Desensitize

(CHORUS)
Doomed...Your own fate
Rotted bodies lie...Writhing as they die
Because of you
Doomed...Through your hate
The corpses lie in wake...As you enter hell's gates
Now you shall die

Hey thats pretty good actually. Its all growled really deeply right ?

well, ive developed my style a little more, and the closest i can describe it is at the gates meets cannibal corpse, it isnt a low mortician growl, but it isnt an at the gates scream, so...youll hear it in a little over a month, i promise

i like the lyric's man. as a guitarist i could picture some serious technical riffing beind the chorus'.

thanks, the chorus does in fact have a pretty killer riff to it...ill post our songs when were done recording (late april )

awsome lyrics man. it should b in a deep growl (death metal) voice. and it would sound awsome with some heavy riffs backin it up

Good ones man.

those sucked...... haha just kidding dude, nice work

Lurics are pretty easy tto write once you have a good song to yell at or should I say with.

Good shit man. Keep it up and brutal. \m/

what do u guys think of the lyrics in my signature? I wrote then about 3 years ago and I still like them now! and guess what motherfuckers I am starting up a death metal band!
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I THOUGHT THOSE WERE PRETTY DAMN GOOD, MAN.

Fucking awesome man! Damn good lyrics